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I Stood there in front of that lonely cross in front of a ditch and just stared. It had only been a month but I could still hear the shot echoing around me. Her life for mine. That was the deal. The love of my life gave her only life for me. I was a country so I would still live no matter where the shot hit but she did it anyway.

“What are you doing here Germany?” I glanced back and soon saw Britain. He seemed confused.

“Just visiting. What  about you?” He walked closer and soon stopped close by.

“I’m confused about something. Why did she do that? Didn't she know?” I laughed a bit as a tear fell and I soon opened my hand. I already had gotten the ring.

“She knew I was the country of Germany but she thought I was mortal..... I never got to tell her that I would have been fine if you had done that to me.... I never got to tell her a lot of things.” I showed him the ring and he stopped right then. I just smiled and soon took off my cross. I had long made it a necklace to keep up with it better.

“How old?”

“Twenty two. Had a great future before her too...”

“Ludwig....”

“An apology won’t bring them back. First France’s love and now mine. You seem to have a thing about taking away lovers you know?”

“Ludwig, we didn't know! She looked just like you!”

“Until the wig fell off. You had a choice then Arthur. You chose to take her life. A gentlemen never goes back on a deal? Why didn't you just kill me and then let France take her to Italy and japan? They could have told her or even you guys. She trusted you all until you called for my death. So why? Why did you pull the trigger Arthur?” He looked away and I just nodded as i put the necklace back on with the ring on there.

“That’s what I thought.You were too scared of the others to go back on it. You chose instead to take an innocent life. So thanks.” Right then I left. Right as I got to the car, I hear him hit the ground sobbing.  I didn't care though. His tears wouldn't bring her back. Nothing would ever bring her back.
so this is a month after and Britain fully realizes what he did. hop you like it as well as the first part!!!

third part!!!! = [link]
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:iconpitalia:
Pitalia Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2013   General Artist
Is France's love Joan of Arc????
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rogueskylar Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
yep :)
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GermanysGirl16 Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2013
OMg poor Luddy and poor Artie :(
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rogueskylar Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
ik..... if you can find part three, you won't feel so bad for the hunk then lol
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GermanysGirl16 Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2013
OMg I luv you , I love you and I luff yew for writing a third part :D !
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rogueskylar Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
wait, you're confessing love for someone you don't know? and yeah... a lot of people were asking for it lol so i did it. :) glad so many liked it!
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GermanysGirl16 Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013
I mean in a sisterly way, and why wouldn't I luv someone with such awesome writing skills?
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rogueskylar Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
lol it's cool either way hon. and um....i have no clue who you are talking about with these awesome writing skills lol but either way thanks!

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beautifulxr469 Featured By Owner May 24, 2013  Student Artist
wow (;_;) poor Germany! D,: so is that the end or is there another part soon?
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rogueskylar Featured By Owner May 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
sorry that's the end... i couldn't think of a third part.
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beautifulxr469 Featured By Owner May 24, 2013  Student Artist
oh really sad :(
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:iconrogueskylar:
rogueskylar Featured By Owner May 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
i'm sorry!!! *hides in emo corner* it just didn't come to me at the time... but i did just get a really damn cute idea that might work....
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beautifulxr469 Featured By Owner May 24, 2013  Student Artist
no no don't run away *ran to you patting your back* it's okay it's okay, just think of what you are going to write down okay *lifting your chin to see eye to eye* beside you write beautifully *Tilts my head, closed my eyes, and smiles at you* (^_^)
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rogueskylar Featured By Owner May 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
*is beat red* um... thank you.... i don't see how though... it's just random things that pop in my head. and it's so sad....
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beautifulxr469 Featured By Owner May 25, 2013  Student Artist
*pats your head, eyes still close just smiling* well just write down your ideas of what to do and just msg me to see if it's good to use okay *pats your head, opens my eyes, still smiling, stands and walks away with one hand up waving to you but still looking ahead* hope you'll msg me! I can't wait for ideas! SEE YA!
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rogueskylar Featured By Owner May 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
um... how to msg? note? cus i've got it typed... i had spare time....
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SecretGermanyLover Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
So cool!!! Just so you know, the whole "Black Magic" thing wouldn't work. It would sort of create a paradox.
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rogueskylar Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
yeah that's what i found out when i thought about it. so i just made the brit feel like a jerk :)
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Prussiasbitch911 Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Dammnnnnnnn...........
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rogueskylar Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
yep.....
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Prussiasbitch911 Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
wtf....... lol XD
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ChirikoMasashi Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
:iconsobplz:





thanks.....for the part 2....
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:iconrogueskylar:
rogueskylar Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
no problem :) i was bored again and felt like making Britain pay for killing all my readers lol
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AndyStarfish Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Omg more please and thank you
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rogueskylar Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
wait what!? *is confused* more?
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:iconandystarfish:
AndyStarfish Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Yes I really like this :) you should continue it a bit more. Well that's if you want to
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GreenEyedOkami Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2013  Student General Artist
iagree~!
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rogueskylar Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
well.... i don't know... if i can figure out how i might ok? :) that's the best i can promise.
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mrsprime1 Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2013
Actually I have an idea for you. You don't have to do it, but England could make the reader alive again with his "Black Magic"
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rogueskylar Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
whoa....maybe..... *is seriously considering it with a small smile cus i just woke up* hmm.......let's see if my brian likes that idea later today. if so, then um part three !
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mrsprime1 Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2013
You don't have to do it. It was just an idea that popped into my head... I just hate seeing Germany so sad.
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rogueskylar Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
yes but with time all wounds heal.... that and apparently my brain decided to hate me and just stop. lack of sleep and all that i guess.
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Puppiluvr Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2013
Hehe just as amazing as the first part!!!! You are awesome!!!! The feels!!!!!
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rogueskylar Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
lol thanks :)
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Puppiluvr Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2013
Hehe your welcome!!!
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rogueskylar Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:)
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Ravens-of-Rome Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconcryforeverplz:
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rogueskylar Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
what!? what!? don't cry!! i know it's all feely and stuff but don't cry!!! then i'll cry!!!!
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Ravens-of-Rome Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:icontissueplz: Here. We can share.
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rogueskylar Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
lol thanks :) the funny thing tho.... is that this is all just horribly fluffy to me a trgic fluff :)
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EmeraldPeacock Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2013
TT_TT
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rogueskylar Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
are you ok?
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EmeraldPeacock Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2013
yeah, I'm fine. Nice part 2, btw.
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rogueskylar Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks :) i was worried about that look... i didn't want you to be sad!!!!
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Eveepaws Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
YOU MADE ME CRY! *Sniffles* Your amazing!
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rogueskylar Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
wait in the good way!? i don't want to make you cry as if you're sad! that would end all the joy i'm feeling!!! DX
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Eveepaws Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It's the feels man! They got me! Stupid Britain.... WHY HE KILL ME! :iconsupertackleplz: Its good! Great job!!!!
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rogueskylar Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
lol i'm getting good at the feels stuff :) but i know right? if only they hadn't of called for his death!!!! reader would be alive!!!! but thanks for the fave too hon!!! XD
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Eveepaws Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
No problem! Your one of my favorite writers already!
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rogueskylar Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
what!? how!? ive only got three dang it!! XD
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