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We’ll never forget that day. It was the end of the war. The other countries were calling for his death.Germany’s. You were young but felt a strong bond towards the German,stronger than love, you thought. He had made some mistakes but now was paying dearly for them in body and spirit. So you stepped in. You dressed up like him, hid your (H/C) under a wig and hid the fact you were a girl. Then you let them take you. You only had to wait a week before it happened. Now it was time. Britain held the gun to your head while you stood in front of a ditch with a stone face.

“do you confess you bloody git!?”

“Ja.” You didn't let them hear the fear in your voice. You heard the gun click and just let the peace of the waiting death wash over you. He would live if you did this and that was all that mattered. Germany had to live.

Germany’s POV:

She was standing there just letting them do this. She was going to die in my place.

“ (Y/N)! you dumb ass!” Right as Britain pulled the trigger, I tackled her. We fell rolling and soon the hat and wig fell. Her beautiful brown hair fell and soon she shook the hell out of me.

“You’re the dumb ass coming here like this!” She slapped me then and soon got in front of me on her knees. They were all just standing there staring.

“I knew the minute you vent missing vhat you vere doing. now move.” I tried to move her but she elbowed me in the chest making me fall.

“Nien! You've got a life to live! Britain..... If you kill me, let Germany live! Let me trade my life for his!” He just smiled and soon just fired. She gasped and soon fell back as blood gushed out of her chest.

“Fine. A gentlemen won’t go back on deals like that.” Right then they all left as I tried to get the bleeding to stop.

“Ludwig.... It’s OK.... I’m OK.” I just shook my head and pressed harder. She smiled and  soon closed her eyes slowly and the flow slowed.

“Nien! Stay awake!” She just smiled still and soon it just ended. I knelt there on the ground and let the tears flow like rivers down my face. Why had she been this stupid when i had told her a week ago I had loved her?
so it's my first one.... please let me know if it's good ok? *hides in my emo corner* I'm really scared that it sucks so please let me know!
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anakind87 Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2014
Dying for someone else - to let that person live - goes to show that you really love that person - and more than your own life. I'd take the bullet that would end my life - for the person I love.
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Akuma0013 Featured By Owner May 6, 2013
:icontamakisulkplz:
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rogueskylar Featured By Owner May 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
aw cute plz but yep....
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Bleached-Angel Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2013  Student Writer
ITS AWESOME
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rogueskylar Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
um ok? it's not prussia so idk how it could be awesome.
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Bleached-Angel Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2013  Student Writer
the story is awesome
doesnt have to be prussia to be awesome
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rogueskylar Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
lol ok then :)
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Bleached-Angel Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2013  Student Writer
Dont tell prussia that
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rogueskylar Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
my prussia won't care lol
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Bleached-Angel Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2013  Student Writer
lol Okay
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B-Rabit Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
good job!
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rogueskylar Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
um thanks! feel free to keep reading this one. it was just going to be a one sot but the idea developed further lol
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B-Rabit Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
lol
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GermanysGirl16 Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2013
im so crying, you made me cry, you made a stoic person cry, it was so beautiful.
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rogueskylar Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
well i'm glad you like it but please... don't cry at part two ok? if you can help it.. otherwise.... *scoots tissues closer* here.
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GermanysGirl16 Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2013
There is a part 2?
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rogueskylar Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
yeah. i wanted to make Britain feel bad for what he did :)
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Prussiasbitch911 Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
omfg...... :iconcryingplz:
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rogueskylar Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
um there's more so make sure you have tissues ok?? *is hiding in emo corner scared*
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Prussiasbitch911 Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
*walks over 2 u in emo corner* its okay, frau! im kinda addicted 2 sad stuff, so no harm done! :iconfrancederpplz:
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rogueskylar Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
you sure? *pokes head out from dark blanket tent* well.... there is four parts to this and all are a bit sad... except last part... that's just fluffy.
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Prussiasbitch911 Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
im sure, frau! I CAN TAKE ANYZHING! :iconprussiaderpplz:
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rogueskylar Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
ok...just be careful.
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Prussiasbitch911 Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
lol danke!
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zekka12 Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2013
Umm excuse me not to be rude or any thing but in the second paragraph you put brown hair instead of hair color
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rogueskylar Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
oh man... i'm sorry.... i wasn't awake when i typed it and going off a paper i wrote.
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zekka12 Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2013
It's okay I was just letting you know
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rogueskylar Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
i guess but thanks for letting me know.
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ChirikoMasashi Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
it doesn't suck at all... :') it's way too good... *cries*
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rogueskylar Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
wait what? i'm glad you don't think it sucks but please.... it's not that good. it's born from me being bored and kind of tired lol
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ChibiPenny Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I love it~ :')
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rogueskylar Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks :)
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ChibiPenny Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
No problem
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rogueskylar Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:)
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AndyStarfish Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
I like it I really do
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rogueskylar Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks! XD i was so scared that no one would and then.... well it's gone now lol
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AndyStarfish Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Ya I have that fear as well so I know what you m an :)
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rogueskylar Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
yeah it can be scary when it's your first time but thanks to people like you, i'm not so scared anymore so thanks :)
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AndyStarfish Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Tee hee to be honest I still get scared every time I write a story but I am glad I can help even if it's a little bit :)
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rogueskylar Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
i think it's just one of those things honestly but it won't be there forever. :) just keeping doing it and it might fade.
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AndyStarfish Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
:)
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rogueskylar Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:)
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AndyStarfish Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Oh no problem :)
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rogueskylar Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:) this just made my night... well that and i got a black butler wall scroll! XD
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Building-Summer Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Aw :( That was good, short and simple :D
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rogueskylar Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks! i'm trying to work on a second one about 2P England right now so if you like him, keep watching! :)
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Building-Summer Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I will! :)
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rogueskylar Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
XD
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rogueskylar Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Omg i love you people!!!!!!!!! XD
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Puppiluvr Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2013
I really like it! So sad.
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